1 · English source
Big news: you can now connect Loopo to over 2,000 apps. Build workflows in minutes, not weeks — and let the boring stuff run itself. Try it free for 14 days.
2 · Raw MT output
Grandi notizie: ora puoi connettere Loopo a oltre 2.000 app. Costruisci flussi di lavoro in minuti, non settimane — e lascia che le cose noiose si gestiscano da sole. Provalo gratis per 14 giorni.
3 · Post-edited version (untouched: ~63%)
Una novità grande: Loopo si connette ora a oltre 2.000 app. Flussi di lavoro in minuti, non settimane — e le cose noiose si gestiscono da sole. Provalo gratis per 14 giorni.
4 · Decision log
| Change | Why |
|---|---|
| Grandi notizie → Una novità grande | 'Grandi notizie' is a calque of 'big news' and reads as translated headline-speak. 'Una novità grande' keeps the warmth with Italian syntax — adjective after noun, article included. |
| puoi connettere → si connette | Impersonal form for marketing claims: Italian B2B email prefers the product as subject ('Loopo si connette') over the user-ability frame ('puoi connettere'). Voice spec: Loopo does the work, the user enjoys it. |
| Costruisci flussi → Flussi di lavoro [elided] | Dropping the imperative verb at the start of the second sentence creates punch: noun phrases stack benefits faster than imperatives in Italian promo rhythm. |
| lascia che... si gestiscano → si gestiscono | 'Lascia che' + subjunctive is correct but heavy; the indicative reflexive is lighter and matches the breezy register. Subjunctive mood is a register dial, not a grammar obligation. |
| Provalo gratis per 14 giorni → kept | The CTA was already right — 'Provalo gratis' is the set Italian SaaS trial formula. Keeping a good MT line is as much post-editing as changing a bad one. |